BonBon's

mona keeps fucking killing me

how do i avoid that ending pls..

hey blam i was stuck in mona's party room that dialogue loop softlocking me 

I must say, this game is actually decent when it comes to quality for these kinds of FNaF Porn games. However, and I know youre already aware of this, but the night system needs a rework. Sure, I managed to get by the second night (The Night that I'm on), but that motherfuckin Fox didn't make it easy. All she does it just run down the hall, and there's no way to prevent her from coming out of the Bar. It's almost impossible to close the door on time if you see her leave, and God Forbid you're on mobile (You're just fucked). BonBon and Nina (I forgot her name, my bad) just act a bit... generic? They act just like Bonnie and Chica, nothing really unique. Here's some suggestions/ideas for how the animatronics could act:

Office Features: Perhaps a mask, maybe an audio lure, or even doors with buttons

Nina (Still forgot her name) and BonBon could essentially be opposing results to an Audio Lure, where BonBon is attracted to the Audio Lure, but Nina (Sorry) avoids it. What I mean is, BonBon is still more aggressive but can be fooled by the Audio Lure, meanwhile Nina (I'm so fucking sorry if I'm wrong) actively avoids whichever room it is played in.

Meanwhile for Vixy and Noma (At least thats what I think her name was). You have to keep an eye on Vixy in order to stall her, but Noma can appear in any room, including the bar. If you look at Noma, she'll start to get progressively more aggressive until she just appears in your office and kills you. Look at Noma for a certain amount of collective time, you die. Don't look at Vixy, she'll slowly exit the bar, and act like BonBon and Nina but faster and can attack from either side.

What is the difference between version "219" and the "POC"?

keyboard doesn’t open in iOS browser so the game is unplayable past the name selection screen, i recommend adding preset names you can click through to allow people to continue or at least a default protagonist name. Just a suggestion ^^

I gotta be honest: There is no world where having the Guard mode mechanic included in a Visual Novel is going to be relevant and/or beneficial to the integrity of the game/story/product/whatever. A.

B., my only real humble suggestion would be... scrapping ALL of the minigames. The 'Protect Mona' mini was pretty amusing for about 3 seconds - after that, just a waste of time. They don't add to the gameplay, they forcefully break immersion. If it's going to be a Novel based on time-sensitive events occurring or not, I would lean HEAVILY into that. Various story paths that greatly differ from one another is the bread and butter of VN's as a platform for storytelling. 

Also, the Art direction is charming - wouldn't worry too much on that; the graphics are complimentary to the story, not the main attraction. Maybe some tweaks during transitions/assets loading (or not loading *Mona Death event*), and this project could be considered polished. 

But, for sure, the minigames/survival loop... man. That's something I'd imagine would be found in some Bonus area, to pay homage to some of the experiences (Galaga ftw) that inspired you to develop the project... not a core gameplay mechanic 😝🩵

I wanted to ask if there was going to be anything substantial in terms of reworks for the "Classic FNAF" sections of the game.

While this is obviously a visual novel first and foremost, I was kind of interested at the inclusion of actual sit 'n survive style gameplay being included, as with all the games there are of this sort of subject (granted hardly any- hardly any FNAF H games at all- get finished) they're just VNs and don't do something like this.

Buuuut... The nightwatch sections are kind of dry and clunky. Mainly, the room feels like an odd size or perspective (I'm not entirely sure which) so panning feels awkward. It's not something you'd think would be as important as it is, but it contributes majorly (along with my next point) to these sections just feeling like "not FNAF" rather than anything fun or unique. Next, the mechanics (so far) have been pretty barebones and simple, just your average "When they're at the door/leave the last camera, close the door!" and the Foxy stand-in of course progresses in stages and then rushes you, so you close the door. (The only difference would be that she doesn't care about being watched it seems.) I'm not saying you have to pull a whole "A Bite At Freddy's" and be super ultra unique or anything, but so many games already fall fairly deep into the whole of "Just FNAF 1 again" and it's really tiresome. Something a little more original would be really cool. Lastly, the visual presentation is just a bit weak. There's not a lot of pizzazz to the camera renders through things like lighting, posing, general quality, or just framing to make the characters appear scary or sexy. Even if they were, the camera color bleed and static makes it hard to actually get a good look at anything.

Overall, this ends up making the night guard sections feel like a filler, a waste of time, and something the game might as well not have. They feel like they were added on a whim, maybe as a "Oh y'know what would be cool?" that didn't get any further thought, and honestly with how cardboard they are I'd rather just have some writing to tell me "Oooh the girls are haunted!!!" for another time that night instead of this. It's not difficult, it's not scary, it's not charming, and it's not erotic (whether or not it's trying to be. I think it's great when a game manages to strike a line between scary and erotic.), which is disappointing. (Mind you it probably shouldn't be that difficult anyways since it's a porn game and people are here for that and maybe the story more than they are the gameplay for a random shoehorned section of a visual novel. It's just something I personally enjoy when it comes to actual FNAF games and it being too easy or simple is detrimental to my enjoyment most times.)

This game is quite promising, but I haven't kept up with every devlog and I have no idea if the night sections are to be updated at all, so I figured I'd leave some feedback on that.

qualcosa non funzina non mi fa andare avanti e schermo nero dopo il pompino

Is the web version the same as the downloadable version, or is there more in the downloadable version compared to the two?  (which is usually how it is that's why I ask lol)

Me sale que tiene virus 

Hello, is the game cool? Do you have plans to translate it into other languages, if so, which ones?

main complainant I have is the way the guy you play as looks. If you're going to make me the character you could at least give me some sort of character customization so he could look like me or hide the characters face.  because right now inside of it being me in the game it's just a guy with the same name as me.
Basically just let me be a white dude with brown hair

How often are updates to the story supposed to be blam?

FINALLY the web version is here now i can masterbate without downloading it

Waaaaaaaaay too much dialogue. Where's the gameplay??